Something new for Corina Lairsey

Corina Lairsey is the sympathetic protagonist in Seaborn.  She makes an appearance in the sequel, Sea Throne. No, she's not a vampire, but she's got a pretty good handle on how death works. I spent a couple hours today thinking about doing a new story with Corina at the POV character.  She doesn't come out of Seaborn in good shape, but she has power. 

One direction that occurred to me was a comic/graphical piece--but something entirely new, a new look, bold, and this is what I sketched for direction.  What do you think?

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